2011考研英语作文（考研的好处 英语作文）

本文目录

• 考研的好处 英语作文
• 华研外语 考研英语必背作文18篇
• 2011考研英语作文热点预测28篇的内容简介
• 英语书写作文范文500字
• 考研作文2011年英语（二）的作文：2008,、2009年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图 （望高手批改）

考研的好处 英语作文

写作思路：可以结合社会的实际情况，直接给出考研的好处，比如考研可以丰富知识，提高能力；增强竞争力等等。

正文：

There are many advantages of postgraduate entrance examination, as follows:

考研有很多的好处，具体如下：

Enrich knowledge, improve ability: undergraduate learning is relatively more extensive, each knowledge will involve some, there are many students feel that they have learned everything but nothing. Graduate students will have a more systematic and in-depth study of a specific field, which will undoubtedly enrich their knowledge reserves, make them understand the field better and form their own knowledge system.

丰富知识，提高能力：本科的学习相对来说更加泛化，各个知识都会涉及一些，有很多同学觉得自己什么都学了但又什么都没学会。研究生会对某一具体领域进行更加系统深入的学习，无疑会丰富自己的知识储备，使得自己对所学领域更加了解，形成自己的知识体系。

Enhance competitiveness: academic qualifications still play a very important role in this society, especially the increasing number of college students and graduate students. Some units will have academic qualifications when recruiting. Even if they say that their ability is strong, how can they get into the door without the stepping stone? Although it is said that even if you go in, you will not stay, but you also have more chances to enter.

增强竞争力：学历在这个社会还是起到非常重要的作用的，尤其大学生、研究生越来越多，有一些单位招聘时会有学历的要求，即便说自己的能力再强，但没有那块敲门砖，自己又如何进去那扇门呢？虽然说即便自己进去也不是百分百就会留下，但自己也拥有了更多进门的机会。

Low cost choice intention city life: everyone has their own city, but many people can not go to their ideal city for various reasons, especially the current life pressure is great, dare not freely choose the ideal city.

低成本选择意向城市生活：每个人都有自己向往的城市，但很多人由于各种原因并不能去到自己的理想城市，尤其是当下生活压力极大，更不敢自由选择理想城市。

But the postgraduate entrance examination is actually a shortcut to experience life elsewhere. The living cost of postgraduate education is low. You can choose to study in the city and live there for two or three years. Even if you won’t stay in the future, you will experience it and have no regrets.

但考研其实是一个体验别处生活的捷径，读研的生活成本较低，可以选择自己喜欢城市的学习，在那里生活两年或三年，即便未来不会留下，自己也体验过，不会有遗憾。

华研外语 考研英语必背作文18篇

考研英语短文写作命题规律分析在研究生英语入学考试中，英语写作历来是考生的一个难点。英语写作主要考查考生运用英语的综合能力，其中包括用英语组织篇章段落的能力、英语的语句表达能力以及语法的综合运用能力。要做好写作部分的试题，要求考生不仅具有较扎实的语言基础，而且还要掌握一些写作的基本技能，如：信息的分析和综合能力以及丰富的想像力。英文写作是一个最能体现考生书面英语水平和技能的测试项目。一、写作B部分命题的基本指导思想考试大纲对写作的评价目标根据《大纲》规定：考生应根据题目以及写作提纲或规定的情境、图表、图画等写出大约200个词的短文。具体要求概括如下：（1）内容切题，包含提纲或图画的全部要点和信息。所谓内容切题是指所写的短文切合题意，即正确理解题目的意思。误解题目或曲解题意，写出来的短文答非所问就是跑题。另外，也要注意不漏掉提纲或图画中的要点和信息，如果提纲中给出了三个要点，考生却只写了两个要点，显然从内容上就不切题了。因此，审题是短文写作成败的关键。考生一定要认真阅读写作要求，仔细琢磨题意，弄清题目以及写作提纲或规定情境、图表的内容范围，依此表达题目限定的中心思想，做到内容切题。（2）表达清楚，意思连贯。表达清楚是指清楚地表达思想，而不是含糊其考研辅导班辞，使人不得要领。在写作过程中，考生应思路清晰，运用恰当的语句表达意思。此外，还要根据题目要求，围绕中心提出论点，摆出论据，使短文层次分明，合乎逻辑。意思连贯是指句子与句子、段落与段落之间衔接自然，整体性强。考生应熟练运用连接词语来正确表达一个观点与另一观点之间的关系。（3）用词正确，句式有变化，语言比较规范。语言比较规范是指在遣词造句中应符合英语语法和习惯用法。首先在词语运用上能够选用恰当的、能够准确表达意义的词，并能显示出一定的词汇量(用词面较宽)；其次，写出的句子符合语法规范，没有重大语法错误，句式上多变，不要只用简单句或陈述句，应适当增加句子形式的多样性，不仅有短句，也有长句，不仅有简单句，也有并列句、复合句等等。（4）文章的长度符合要求。长度是指短文的字数。符合要求的字数应是160至200个词左右。现将大纲对写作部分的评分标准摘录如下：（1）20～17分。内容切题，包括题中所列三个方面的内容；清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。（2）16～13分。内容切题，包括题中所列三个方面的内容；比较清楚地表达其内涵，文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误；文章长度符合要求。（3）12～9分。内容切题，基本包含题中所列三个方面的内容；基本清楚地表达其内涵，句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。（4）8～5分。内容基本切题，基本包含题中所列三个方面的内容；语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。（5）4～1分。基本按照要求写作，但只有少数句子可以教育学考研辅 导理解。（6）0分。文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。二、写作B部分材料的选择（一）选择材料的特点纵观历年试卷，写作的题目多集中在社会伦理、人生哲理、学校教育、人际关系交往、娱乐方式、健康和生活方式等方面。最近几年的命题多与当前的社会现实和热点问题有关，要求考生对社会现象和社会的经济、文化生活有所关注和思考，并形成自己的见解。从命题内容来看，其材料特点有：1. 普遍性：发生在身边的事情，各种考生都有一定的体验，可以有感而发。比如2003年的温室里的花和2002年的中国与国际的交流。不管你身处何处，这些现象和变化都是中国人共同体验的。考题不会考查一部分考生熟悉，而另一部分考生不了解的内容。对于社会生活中的敏感问题，一般不会涉及。2. 教育性：论题有警示作用的，可让考生作深层思考。比如，有关人生哲理的2008年 “合作的重要性”，2007年的“乐观心态是成功的关键”，2004年的“终点又是新的起点”。3. 社会性：社会关心的、典型的事。如2009年的题目是网络的“近”与“远”，2006年的题目是偶像崇拜，2005年则对赡养老人问题展开讨论，2003年的试题既可以讨论加入世界贸易组织后的中国经济发展的现实问题，也可以谈孩子的教育问题，2002年的题目是中外文化交流问题。因此考生平时应关注社会性的问题，加深思考深度，并且阅读英文报纸，积累相关词汇。在近10年的考题中三分之一是正面现象的分析论证，如2004年的终点又是起点，2002年的“国际化交流”，2001年的“希望工程或爱心工程”。而其余的考题关注的是社会中存在的一些问题，也就是说三分之二的题目是有关负面问题的分析解决。（二）作文的体裁从体裁上看，近14年的作文都为论说文。论说文的特点是说议结合，一部分为对论教育学考研题的说明，一部分为议论，或者夹叙夹议。这种写作的难点在于将说明或描写与议论有机地结合起来，形成一个衔接自然的文章。下表为近十年考题特点的小结。时间主题题材类型2013年作出选择人生哲理图画式作文2012年乐观面对生活人生哲理图画式作文2011年旅途之“余”社会生活图画式作文2010年文化融合文化与交流图画式作文2009年网络的“近”与“远”社会生活图画式作文2008年合作的重要性人生哲理图画式作文2007年乐观心态是成功的关键人生哲理图画式作文2006年偶像崇拜社会生活图画式作文2005年年轻人应该赡养父母社会伦理图画式作文2004年终点又是新的起点人生哲理图画式作文2003年温室里的花经不起风雨教育或经济问题图画式作文2002年中国与世界的文化交流文化与交流图画式作文2001年困难的时候，人人都应该献爱心社会伦理图画式作文2000年自然生态平衡遭破坏环境保护图画式作文

2011考研英语作文热点预测28篇的内容简介

①本书要严格按照新大纲命题方向编写，首先分析历年命题规律和写作技巧以及应对侧率和高分要素等； ②正文里热点预测28篇作文只针对的是20分值的短作文；正文“上篇”主要是阐述考研大纲对写作（应用文和短文）的要求、出题规律与方法策略等；“下篇”即是预测热短文；③最后附赠的有：应用文以及其模板、各个类型的的写作常用句型与写作高频词汇短语；④在每个“行文思路”里要标示出写此短文需要的时间是多少分钟。

英语书写作文范文500字

1. 求写英语作文500字（高水平）

Mr. Obama and the Democratic leadership vainly aspire to expiration of high-end tax cuts, while Republicans in Congress pull it off with holding economy and other measures hostage. However, Warren E. Buffett, one of the super-rich, entertains the idea of raising taxes and encourage that the tax rates needs to be reformed so that most of the help flows to those who most need it: low- and middle-ine taxpayers. He suggests that the primary goal is to rearrange American finances with an effective and instant effort. And then it turns to fight with taxes’ breaks and lower rates to make the reform fairer, that is to say, raise more revenue for most Americans. The major challenges are remaining rates for overwhelming majority of taxpayers unchanged and maintaining the current 2-percentage-point reduction in the employee contribution to the payroll tax. For the rich groups, making more than $1 million, it is imperative to raise rates on taxable ine in excess of $1 million, including, dividends and capital gains. And for the mega-rich, it is essential to add an additional increase in rate.Acting as a spectator, I vote to let Buffett’s Utopia e true. Under such a ’shared sacrifice’ principle, everyone could embrace an abundant shower of various blessing. Not only could the country’s deficit be played down but also the wealth gap could be narrowed, which contribute to stability and prosperity of this great country. Acting as a ’Solomon’, the above opinion couldn’t be more wrong. According to Gaetano Mosca, an Italian prominent politician, all ruling classes tend to bee hereditary in fact if not in law. Although the party and the rich are known as representatives of people’s interests, that the only glimmer of hope in the donkey-verse-elephant battle is not pletely over, is the ugliest part of the saga. All except the most primitive societies are, in practice, ruled by a numerical minority. None of the upper class is willing to take off the hypocritical mask and avow their crimes of oppression and tyranny, for which they can always provide high-sounding pretext. Elites or aristocracies are always keeping seeking after an ethical and legal basis for their rule, which can be recognized by low- and middle-ine taxpayers. In Han dynasty, the despotic domination is embellished as noble characters, literary talents, intelligence and wisdom of the scholars at that time. Also in Roman Empire, the despotic domination is embellished as high minds, brave hearts, determination and fortitude of aristocrats at that time. Such a trick of minority government is also mon in modern American. And it just feel like that the ruled class are required to profess Christianity and their bible is Only the Super-Rich Can Save Us! The only way out is to struggle for a bloody march with brains and braveness. Also it is advantageous for us not to squander the kindness from the top, even if it is eleemosynary grace. And therefore, some day, someone among us could turn into another Ma Yun of China.。

2. 英语文章 500字 简单一些的

Friendship is indispensable to people’s life. A man without friends is an angel without wings, whose life will suffer in the long tolerance of loneliness and depression. Friendship is the mother of our psyche, who’ll warm her kid when hurt occurs. We have much to share with our friends in life, perplexity, excitement, bitterness etc. Alas, it’s magnificent to maintain a genuine friendship.

友谊对人的生活是不可缺少的。 没有朋友的一个人是天使没有翼，生活在寂寞和消沉长的容忍将遭受。 友谊是我们的灵魂的母亲，将温暖她的孩子，当创伤发生时。 我们在生活、困惑、兴奋，冤苦等有分享与我们的朋友。 呀，它是壮观的维护一个纯友情。

????It takes many special qualities to make a friend. Understanding should e first. Only when we get a better understanding of each other can we gain an authentic and meaningful friendship. We may find our hobbies of mon interests. This feeling of affinity gets us closer and closer.

它采取许多特别质量交朋友。 理解应该首先来。 只有当我们得到时更好的理解对彼此能我们获取地道和意味深长的友谊。 我们也许发现共同利益我们的爱好。 亲合力的这种感觉得到我们更加接近和更加紧密。

3. 帮忙写英语作文,400到500个字.

To speak of Australian culture is to recognise our mon heritage. It is to say that we share ideas, values, sentiments and traditions, and that we see in all the various manifestations of these what it means to be Australian. Culture, then, concerns identity - the identity of the nation, munities and individuals. We seek to preserve our culture because it is fundamental to our understanding of who we are. It is the name we go by, the house in which we live. Culture is that which gives us a sense of ourselves. Culture, therefore, also concerns self-expression and creativity. Not only do we seek to preserve our heritage and tradition, we cultivate them. We preserve the things that make us what we are and cultivate the means of reaching what we can be. We recognise that the life of the nation and all our lives are richer for an environment in which art and ideas can flourish, and in which all can share in the enjoyment of them.With a cultural policy we recognise our responsibility to foster and preserve such an environment. We recognise that the ownership of a heritage and identity, and the means of self-expression and creativity, are essential human needs and essential to the health of society. Because culture reflects and serves both the collective and the individual need, because it at once assures us of who we are and inspires us with intimations of the heights we might reach, this cultural policy pursues the in goals of democracy and excellence. It will make the arts and our intellectual and cultural life and heritage more accessible to all. And it will help to create the conditions under which the finest expressions of our creativity can be reached and enjoyed. The ultimate aim of this cultural policy is to enrich the people of Australia.This is the first national cultural policy in our country’s history, but if that suggests a lack of will in the past, there was never a lack of interest. The debate goes back to the foundations of European settlement. Colonial Australians generally equated cultural goals with the successful transplantation of British civilisation to Australia; with the creation of `a new Britannia in another world’, in the famous words of William Charles Wenorth. This refrain continued well into this century, of course, but it has had to share the stage with the distinctly Australian voice that emerged with the birth of the nation 100 years ago.供参考 谢谢。

4. 英语写作,高分悬赏100分以上,只要求自己写的,120字以上,

Dear Mr.Gee Smythe:It’s my honour to write to you and invite you to give us a talk for my club.First of all,regarding our club - FREE STYLE MUSIC CLUB (FSMC),it has been set up for people who like music.This club is a stage for people who like music to know each other and discuss about music.We don’t charge money for our members,everybody will feel it’s their home.We got a “Free Presentation Department” to spread our members’ music.They will have chance to give a show on the real stage.The performers are drawn from the club’s membership with occasional recitals by visiting professional musicians.The FSML concerts provide the opportunity for club members to gain performance experience in front of an audience that is certainly knowledgeable and passionate about music,but which is above all friendly,encouraging and very appreciative.All the people who like music are wele to join the FSML.Being a member of the club,and making use of club facilities,implies a certain willingness to participate in club concerts.Here are the benefits of membership:Performance opportunities at FSML concerts; practice facilities; membership of the club’s email list,advance notification of the programme details for each concert; the most important is all the members can have fun in my club.However,some of the members are eager to know deeply about American country music and they just know the surface.As we know you are a native English speaker and you like music very much.Your several speeches about country music in the past are very interesting and vivid.That’s why you are so famous and people would like to follow you.We believe you will give us a good presentation.With you talk this time,our club will be bright and our members will be encouraged.At the time we appreciate the country music,we also will realize the true essence of American country music.We will hold the opening concert on 7:00 pm this Saturday in No.161 Longdong Street.How do you think if this topic’s name is “ESSENCE OF AMERICAN COUNTRY MUSIC”?We highly appreciate your early reply.Thanks!Best regards!。

5. 帮我写英语作文400字围绕后面的问题写1.whatdoyoueherefor?(

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6. 帮忙写个英语作文..高手来..500字.

同学，抄袭系吾好的行为，虽然我都系抄的

Dear Jack,Hi!As we all know, guangzhou is going to hold the 16th Asian Game. It is a great event. I’m proud of it. It is also the pride of all the people in Guangdong.Guangzhou is a big city, lies in the south of china. It is famous for its culture. As an old saying goes,Food is the first necessity of the people. Well,first, let me introduce the food in Guangzhou.The most familiar Chinese dishes originated from the Cantonese cuisine. As most residents originate from the Guangdong province where Guangzhou (Canton) is located, Hong Kong is the world capital for this style of cooking. The Cantonese people are very finicky when it es to the freshness of their food. Even the amount of time taken for a live, swimming fish to be placed on a plate is kept to a minimum. Cantonese cooking is somewhat lighter than most regional Chinese cuisine. Preparation methods usually involve stir-frying in shallow water or oil in a wok. As cooking time is short, the flavors and nutrition of the food is preserved. Vegetable and fish dishes are often steamed without the use of too much oil. Sauces made from ingredients like ginger, garlic, onion, vinegar, and sugar are plemented to enhance flavors. They are suit for your appetite. Second, there are also my scenic spots in Guangzhou.Guangzhou was a river port and a sea port a trade port in the east, with mountains embracing rivers, and rivers surrounding the mountains, clouded mountain and the Pearl River extending to the horizon, mountains screening the city, waters reaching all the seas. "With mountains at the back, overlooking to the sea" The favorable geographical environment has helped to make Guangzhou what it is today, a city with a unique style and characteristic that will be eternal in its greatness. After all, Guangzhou is certainly a good place that worth to visit, I sincerely hope you can e and share the joy of 16th Asian Game with me together!Yours,(name).

7. 英语作文写作

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a puter you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand,specifications/features, condition and price and you contact information. You should write at least 80 words but no more than 120 words.

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说明：这一部分，你可以在校园网站上写一则30分钟的广告来推销你在大学时使用的电脑。您的广告可能包括品牌、规格/特性、条件和价格以及您的联系信息。你至少应该写80个单词，但不超过120个单词。

8. 考研基础英语作文要求500字,怎么写

写作是英话试卷的第三部分，分为2节，共30分.A节：根据给定情景写一篇应用性短文，100词左右（不计标点），形式包括：私人信件、公务公函、备忘录、摘要、报告等.满分1O分.B节：根据提示信息作文，160~200词（不计标点）.提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等.满分20分.评分标准A节应用文的评分侧重于信息点的覆盖和内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和用语的恰当.可在文中使用提示语中的关键词，但使用其中的词组或句子则会被扣分.B节作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性.高分作文A节（9~10分）、B节（17~20分）的具体要求1.很好地完成了试题规定的任务.2.包含所有内容要点.3.语法结构合理、词汇丰富.4.语言自然流畅，语法错误极少.5.有效采用多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰.6.格式和用语恰当.知道了考研英语作文考什么、怎么考，下面就让我们一起将通往高分作文路途上的拦路虎各个击破.拦路虎一：文不对题“文不对题”是考研英语写作中经常出现的问题之一，不少老师在阅卷时都遇到过这样的作文——内容充实，条理清晰，用词准确，却与题目规定的内容大相径庭，最后得分非常低.考研英语写作是非开放性的，不可以随意创作，考生要严格按照题目的要求来展开文章.因此，在写作时认真审题是第一步.审题不仅仅是要仔细读题目，还要准确地理解、提取题目中的信息点和内容，明确题目的要求.由于考试的时间有限，因此要求我们在考场上必须快速、准确地审题.这就需要我们在平时多看一些题目，只有通过练习才能在考试时熟能生巧.平时我们可以按照下面的步骤进行审题练习：（1）看题目，划出其中的核心词汇，找出作文内容的要点以及格式要求等.（2）想一想这道题考的是什么方面的话题，应该从哪 方面展开，可以找到什么样的论据.（3）找到范文，与自己的构思进行对照、检验.对于历年考研英语的作文真题，尤其是近几年的新题，建议大家动手练一练.仅在脑海中对作文题进行构思虽然节省时间，但是很多问题只有通过完整地写作才能发现.考试时，要为自己留下一段比较充足的时间进行审题及构思，最好简略的列一个提纲，比如一两个关键词、中文或英文，甚至是一些简单的符号、标记都行.只要能够让自己明白，起到提示自己写作思路的作用就可以了.拦路虎二：无话可说在写作中考生常常遇到的一大难题就是无话可说，难以下笔.造成这种情况的主要原因是平时积累少.纵观多年考研英语作文试题，我们可以发现，这些题目几乎从未涉及到偏、难、怪的话题，比如：2003年的话题：温室花朵经不起风雨；2005年的话题：养老“足球赛”；2006年的话题：偶像崇拜等等，只要考生在日常生活中能多看多想，在考试时就不会无话可说.我们可以通过看中文的报刊来提升自己思想的深度与广度，作为写作时的论点与素材，也可以看英文文章来丰富语言.有不少人都提倡多背文章，但是背书对很多人来说并不是一件容易的事.其实要起到培养语感、积累语言素材的作用，只要多读多看就可以了.这些文章可以是你感兴趣的小短文，也可以是英文教材中的课文.在此，笔者还向大家推荐另一类材料，那就是阅读理解的题目，这些题目中的文章内容丰富，用语规范，长短也比较适宜，尤其是历年考研英语真题中的文章.通过反复阅读，不仅有益于作文，也可以帮助我们加深对阅读理解部分出题方式的感受与体会.虽然这些文章不一定要背，但是要记住，我们对文章内容及其表达方式越熟悉，在需要时它就越能为我所用.甚至在考试时，如果我们在阅读中看到好的句子，也可以把它划下来以便在写作文时借用.当然，如果能在考前准备一些比较通用的小例子，把它记熟，对于丰富写作内容也是很有益的.但由于考研作文对文章篇幅的要求，这些例子不要太复杂，最好能够用1~2句话说清楚即可；或者就选用一些人们耳熟能详的例子，仅用简单的语言概述一下即可.比如，在使用爱迪生发明灯丝这个人们非常熟悉的例子时，我们就不必花太多笔墨讲述故事本身，而可以直接过渡到对观点的论述：We can learn from the experience of the great inventor Thomas Edison that sometimes a series of apparent failures is really a precursor to success.拦路虎三：结构混乱结构混乱是写作最为忌讳的问题.有话可说是写作最基本的要求，但要写好作文则必须把话说到点子上，把意思表达的清楚明白.要做到条理清楚，就要求文章的结构合理.而只有在写作时理清思路，才能使作文结构清晰，从而方便评卷老师理解文章的层次.文章不分段或者分段过多都是不合理的.现行的考研英语作文题目中一般会有三条要求，考生可以对应的写三段话进行回应.一篇文章一定要有开头段与结尾段.首段不要太长，要开宗明义，明确表明自己的观点.尾段的主要作用是使文章结构完整，主要为归纳或建议.文章主体部分的每一段都应该围绕一个主题来写，每一段都要有主题句，而且主题句最好是每段的首句，这样更有利于避免一段内出现多个论点，或是出现偏题的现象，同时也可以使全文的逻辑结构更加清楚明了.良好的文章结构也可以帮助。

9. 看图写英语作文

On a clear day ,I and my friends play soccer on the playground.when we are playing happily,a group of children older than us grab our site.They robbed us that I feel wronged.Therefore I go home and look for my father to vent my spleen.While my dad listening to my face,He is furious with himself immediately.Then he takes me to get level with these chindren.My father Criticizes them calmly,but as soon as they hear that they are annoyed and give him a good hiding.Finally, we have to go home without argument.My dad feels very beneficial about that today’s children are too difficult to control and at the same time he continus to watch TV helplessly.

主体就是这些了 你自己再加点吧 我没太多时间

考研作文2011年英语（二）的作文：2008,、2009年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图 （望高手批改）

说实话没有一句通顺，建议重写。1. striking contrast？2.Japanese Car Brands3.do not use "phenomenon".4.no comments?5.So chinglish.如果真的要找错误的话，我可能会找到至少30个。